git-bundle.txt: add missing words and punctuation
Add an "and" to separate the two halves of the first sentence of the
paragraph more. Add a comma to similarly separate the two halves of the
second sentence a bit better. Add a period at the end of the paragraph.
Further down in the file, add the missing "be" in "must be accompanied".
Signed-off-by: Martin Ågren <martin.agren@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
diff --git a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt
index 71b5eca..72ab813 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt
@@ -51,10 +51,10 @@
unbundled using the `--fix-thin` option to linkgit:git-index-pack[1].
There is no option to create a "thick pack" when using revision
-exclusions, users should not be concerned about the difference. By
-using "thin packs" bundles created using exclusions are smaller in
+exclusions, and users should not be concerned about the difference. By
+using "thin packs", bundles created using exclusions are smaller in
size. That they're "thin" under the hood is merely noted here as a
-curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation
+curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation.
See link:technical/bundle-format.html[the `bundle-format`
documentation] for more details and the discussion of "thin pack" in
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@
SPECIFYING REFERENCES
---------------------
-Revisions must accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a
+Revisions must be accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a
bundle.
More than one reference may be packaged, and more than one set of prerequisite objects can
